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常州雅思:地图题解析及范文合辑(一)

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一提到地图题,很多同学就会觉得紧张,小编也听到过有同学愤愤地抱怨“每次遇到地图题都得死!”其实,如果了解了地图题的写作要点就可以发现,相比表格或者线图之类的数据类图表题,地图题其实更简单。小编请到新航道的写作男神为大家理一理地图题的写作方法~学会方法,怎么出题都不怕哦!


首先,我们一起了解下雅思写作的评分标准,严格的四项——词汇、语法、连接、任务完成度来判分,而非根据自己对一篇文章的整体观感来给分。好,废话不多说,我们从剑13上的例题开始吧!


Cambridge Past Papers Vol.13 Test 1
《剑13》Test 1地图题

 

审题&解析

剑13的套测试题的小作文(地图)具备以往考察地图题的特点,年份之间的主要变化为设施的变化,方向依旧为扩大、改建、重修、新增等。但与之不同的是,地图题的整体性较强且变化幅度较大,尤其体现在一些比较明显的建筑物的改建。

此地图题描述或表达的难点:
1 关于简单变化的位置和相对位置描述,比如car park的描述。在car park的位置描述上,相对比较简单,但是car park的相对位置关系想要描述得到位、准确且出彩是需要一定的语言功底。
2 建筑物的粘连关系较强,在表达上需要一定的方法,否则将影响整体性得分。比如围绕中间部分hospital road而展开的描述,涉及到原有建筑物的改建,以及与周围粘连建筑物的关系的表述。


小作文范文

段:总体描述给出的地图(以对比的方式强调整体不同点)
The two maps illustrate how road access to the hospital in 2010 was different from it was in 2007.
 
第二段:可以选择由东到西的描述方式或者由西向东,但将二者对比发现东边的变化与其他建筑物相比没有太强的连带关系,故推荐先选择东边进行描述。
One distinguishable feature is the addition of a car park. In 2010, the originally shared car park became exclusive for the hospital’s staff, and the public could use the new car park, which is located east of the hospital building and accessible from the Ring Road, to access the hospital via the east entrance, an entry point that is also new.
 
第三段:在由东往西的描述过程中,带入中间部分的描写,之后描述西边的变化。
In addition, Hospital Road had a makeover in 2010. Noticeably, the six bus stops on both sides of the road were removed. Secondly, there were two roundabouts at each end of the road and a bus station sitting on the road’s west side. In addition, as the roundabouts and the stations were connected, visitors could exit or enter the station from either roundabout.
 
第四段:固定操作部分:描述变化的幅度以及变化后的突出特点。
Overall, access to the city hospital changed enormously, and the hospital became more accessible in 2010.

 

Cambridge Past Papers Vol.13 Test 4
《剑13》Test 4地图题

 

审题&解析

剑13的第四套测试题的小作文(地图)是一道非常典型、非常基础的地图题模式,主要的大变化为改建或新增。

由于这篇地图题的模式比较传统,因此本地图题的写作难点不在是Task Achievements而更多层面往其他三个评分标准上倾斜。

若是简单地使用地图题的一般套句来描述相应的地图题中所呈现的变化,比较难写得出彩;换句话说,词汇的准确与灵活使用,语法表达的自然与多样在行文中将显得较为重要。


小作文范文

段:改写题目并点出主要的变化区域
The two maps illustrate the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions.
 
第二段:按照箭头的指向,先描述入口区域的变化,从变大非常大的部分开始着手进而写到小变化。
First, the entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded, with a sports shop and a café in the west and east corners. However, the central area of the premises will not change enormously, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating space will remain the way they are.
 
第三段:由入口区域转向至东西方向的区域,承接上一段的思路,先写大变化后写小变化,期间可以通过一些连接词,给考官反映出写作逻辑顺序。
Immense changes will happen to the outdoor courts that are now independent of the central area. Replacing the west court, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be removed, and where it is now, there will be a number of facilities. First, a sizeable sports hall will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool. Second, directly opposite the sports hall, there will be a pair of dance studios. In addition, a changing room, closely adjacent to the café, will be built in the southeast corner.
 
第四段:固定操作部分:描述变化的幅度以及变化后的突出特点。
Overall, the sports center will have greater versatility.
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