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托福独立写作范文:乐于助人话题

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摘要:今天为大家奉上托福独立写作:乐于助人话题(2017年5月13日托福考试真题),希望能帮助大家更好的备考托福。

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    考题回忆:

    Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child(5-10 years old)?

    1.being helpful

    2.being honest

    3.being well organized

    解题思路:选 being helpful

    1.乐于助人可以使孩子获得家庭和社会的归属感,认识自己的价值。

    2.帮助孩子培养同情心。

    3.诚实是儿童本身具有的内在品质,需要家长保护这种品质。而由于这个年龄段的小孩很难做到完全照顾自己,所以良

好的组织能力对他们而言有些难度,短期之内难以提高。

    参考范文:

    The age between 5-10 is a critical period for children to develop intellectually and emotionally as well 

as to form life values, which aroused concern for parents as to how to cultivate them to be good members of 

society. Of course, being ready to help others, honesty and excellent organizing skills are all good qualities, 

but I would highlight being supportive to others.

    Fundamentally, instilling a sense of helpfulness in children comes by helping them feel part of a family 

and larger community. By assisting parents with some house chores, purchasing goods for a family get-together, or 

contributing some idea to family decision making, a child would realize that he is not an outsider but actually 

plays a role in family affairs. Similarly, in kindergarten or primary school, helping teachers with class 

management or shedding some light on fixing a big problem for his peers can not only allow children to gain a 

sense of accomplishment but also to confirm his indispensable role in the community.

    In addition, being supportive also contributes to being sympathetic, which is an increasingly valued 

quality in today’s society. Children naturally have a desire to be helpful. In fact, children as young as 12 

months old can recognize when others are in distress and may try to comfort them. Between age 12 and 24 months 

children begin showing signs of empathy and concern. Everyone will experience troubles in real life or at work 

when they are easily to be depressed and feel hopeless. It is imperative that parents show their children that a 

comforting word, a helping hand, an understandable hug would be a healing portion for people in need. It needs no 

further explanation that a child with sympathy tends to be welcomed and easy to make friends not only at home but 

also at school or other occasions.

    On the other hand, it is, of course, undeniable that honesty and a good sense of management are also 

cherishable qualities. Children should be made aware that being honest means being trustworthy. But it is 

generally accepted that, young children, in essence, are honest deep down and would not tell lies intentionally, 

so honesty is an innate feature. It is due to bad influence from others that the innocent young children learn to 

tell lies and become dishonest. Thus, parents need to protect this treasure instead of simply telling kids how 

important honesty is. As for managerial ability, for children between 5-10 years old that can barely look after 

themselves, it can hardly be developed in a short term.

    In conclusion, showing kids how to be helpful is a value that can stay with them as they grow and make 

them useful and heartwarming adults.


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