独立写作真题范文 | 三两招突破独立写作系列(六)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　One can learn a lot about a person from the type of friends the person has.　”

　　抽象话题很难解，心里有各种零碎的想法或者模糊的想法，却很难用言语去表达。

　　今天常州托福小编分享的招式是“话语式”写作，并且把自己“带入”。

　　常州托福小编分享举个例子，比如，我们为了思路流畅，我们可能就把Introduction写成下面的样子：

　　I can be learned from the friends I have, and I know that I learn people from the friends they have. This is my opinion on the given statement.

　　全是“我”?都是“I”?对的。

　　这么话语式的表达可以么?比起不知如何下笔从而胡编乱造，这就很可以。

　　进入Body部分(在陈述道理的部分)，我们依然追求一种“话语式的陈述”的style，在这样的style中，勇敢的把自己带入，用“我”/“我们”的视角看问题。

　　I believe that friends are similar people. The logic is therefore quite simple: aswe know one, we know another and can know all, because we may all have the ability to generalize and find the universal traits and characteristics they all have. Therefore, I may study the many friends of a target individual and know the target one, because those similarities are the many clues. Doesn’t sound persuasive? Here are some of the numerous cases that indicate my point.

　　举例大家都会，此处略。

　　Also, I believe that many of us seek similarities when we make friends, because differences may cause discomfort, displeasure or conflict, and those unpleasant situations may be fearful. By contrast, having things I and other people have in common creates the sense of security. To feel secure, we therefore find people of our kind, and to know a particular one, we study anyone of the kind. Not persuaded? Here come a few instances, of the many, of my point.

　　通过描述自己的感受(而不是逼着自己用客观的眼光看问题)，往往可能让行文的过程变得简单，不那么有思考的紧张感或者压力。同时，话语式的写作的文章的质量并不肯定比用第三人称陈述时的文章的质量低，因为行文照样流畅，陈述照样清晰，道理照样明确，例子照样丰富。