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2018年6月2日雅思大作文题目

“ Many people today prefer socializing online to spending time with friends in local community. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”

                         

解析&审题

本周是一个大家都非常熟悉的话题。我们现在喜欢在网上交友，却不愿意和邻居聊天，这个现象是好还是坏呢？

有些同学拿到这个题目，可能非常开心，马上就会想到网上聊天的种种坏处，比如伤害身体，不安全，而且交不到真正的朋友，等等。也可能有很多同学想到网上交友的种种好处，比如节约时间，提高效率，不受时间空间限制，等等。

这样的作文就是典型的“一边倒”结构，就是只讨论“网上交友”的好处/坏处，但即使同时讨论“网上交友”的好处和坏处，就本题而言，也是不够的，因为没有涉及到题目给出的另外一个关键信息“在当地社区和朋友一起度过”。

仔细审题后，我们会发现，本题其实需要考生比较“网上交往”和“与朋友在线下交往”两种与朋友交往的方式的。

因此，无论我们采取哪一种行文结构（一边倒或者双边讨论），我们都需要涉及这两个方面，如果仅涉及“网上交往”，在task response方面就是不完整的。也就是说，当考生在论述“网上交往”的好处或者坏处时，一定要在与“线下交往”的比较中来进行才可以，没有比较，这个作文就是没有完整回答题目的问题，会被扣分。

以下是本题高分范文。

 

老师笔记

01

When it comes to socializing with friends, online interaction is a highly convenient tool, but this does not mean that face-to-face interaction is becoming something of the past. Regardingsocializing online with friends, there are clear advantages and disadvantages in comparison with face-to-face interaction.

当谈到到与朋友的社交活动时，在线互动是一个非常方便的工具，但这并不意味着面对面的互动已经成为过去。相比于面对面互动，与朋友网上交往有明显的优势和劣势。

解析
（1）本范文没有过多的背景介绍，直接提出话题并亮出自己的观点：两种社交方法各有利弊。这决定了本文即将采取“双边讨论”的论证结构。
（2）when it comes to... 当谈到......（后接名词或动名词）
（3）something of the past 过去的事物
（4）regarding 关于
（5）in comparison with... 与......相比

02

For one thing, socializing online enables people to maintain friendships that might otherwise be lost. This may refer to someone who has moved away, someone who becomes ill, or someone who is unable to meet face to face for whatever reason.For another, many people turn to the Internet as a tool with which to socialize with their friends because it is not time or place sensitive. In other words, people can communicate with their friends any time and any place. This is particularly important when they want to tell their friends about something very urgent. Meeting friends up in the local community, however, does not enjoy these advantages.

首先，网上社交可以让人们保持那些不用此法就可能失去的友谊。这可能包括已经搬走的人，生病的人，或出于各种原因不能见面的人。其次，许多人求助于互联网作为与朋友交往的工具，因为网络对时间和地点都不敏感。换句话说，人们可以在任何时间、任何地点与朋友交流。当他们想告诉朋友一些非常紧急的事情时，这一点特别重要。然而，在当地社区与朋友见面并不享有这些优势。

解析
（1）本段讨论网络社交的两个优势（与不能见面的人保持友谊；网络社交不受时空限制）。注意本段最后一句，就是明确网络社交的这两个优势是与线下交往相比较而言的。
（2）for one thing..., for another... 首先......; 其次......
（3）maintain friendship 保持友谊；维护友谊
（4）for whatever reason 无论出于何种原因
（5）sensitive 敏感的
（6）urgent 紧急的

                                

03

For all the advantages that online socializing has to offer, it can never really replace human contact. The basic reason behind is that humans are social animals and they love getting around with people, particularly with friends. Nothing can beat the feelings of walking together, playing games, doing sports, going for picnics and excursions or short trips. There are times when friends mustshun smartphones for a while, do away with interacting on virtualsocial networking platforms, and get down to real things in life, face to face. To build friendships, indeed, the quantity of digital interaction does not equal the quality of face-to-face interaction.

尽管在线社交有这些优势，但它永远无法真正取代人的接触，这背后的根本原因是人类是社会性的动物，他们喜欢与人在一起，尤其是朋友。没有什么能胜过一起散步，玩游戏，做运动，野餐，郊游或短途旅行的感觉。有些时候，朋友必须暂时躲避手机，不在虚拟社交平台上进行互动，而是面对面地处理生活中的真实问题。的确，为了建立友谊，数字交往的数量无法比肩面对面互动的质量。

解析
（1）本段讨论线下交往的优势，采用说理的方式。人是社会性动物，喜欢和朋友一起，然后举例说明人类在一起喜欢做那些活动，最后总结（网络社交数量虽多，却不及面对面交往的质量）。
（2）for all 尽管；虽然（= in spite of)
（3）replace 取代
（4）beat 胜过；打击
（5）shun 避免（= avoid）
（6）do away with 扔掉；抛弃
（7）virtual 虚拟的
（8）get down to... 认真做......
（9）quantity 数量

04

As a conclusion, with clear advantages and disadvantages of the two modes of interaction, friends can alternatively socialize with one another face to face and via the Internet. Socializing online, however popular it can be, cannot play the same role as human contact. Therefore, face-to-face interaction will never go out of fashion.

综上所述，由于这两种互动方式各有优缺点，朋友们可以选择面对面或通过互联网进行社交活动。无论在线社交有多流行，都没有与人类接触一样的功能。因此，面对面的互动永远不会过时。

解析
（1）本段为结论段，再次明确重申观点。好的结尾段应该包括两个内容：一是对前文的总结，二是适当的延伸。因此，好作文的结尾段通常都是2-3句话组成。
（2）alternatively 有选择地
（3）via 通过
（4）go out of fashion 过时

 

本场雅思考试范文

When it comes to socializing with friends, online interaction is a highly convenient tool, but this does not mean that face-to-face interaction is becoming something of the past. Regarding socializing online with friends, there are clear advantages and disadvantages in comparison with face-to-face interaction.

For one thing, socializing online enables people to maintain friendships that might otherwise be lost. This may refer to someone who has moved away, someone who becomes ill, or someone who is unable to meet face to face for whatever reason. For another, many people turn to the Internet as a tool with which to socialize with their friends because it is not time or place sensitive. In other words, people can communicate with their friends any time and any place. This is particularly important when they want to tell their friends about something very urgent. Meeting friends up in the local community, however, does not enjoy these advantages.

For all the advantages that online socializing has to offer, it can never really replace human contact. The basic reason behind is that humans are social animals and they love getting around with people, particularly with friends. Nothing can beat the feelings of walking together, playing games, doing sports, going for picnics and excursions or short trips. There are times when friends must shun smartphones for a while, do away with interacting on virtual social networking platforms, and get down to real things in life, face to face. To build friendships, indeed, the quantity of digital interaction does not equal the quality of face-to-face interaction.

As a conclusion, with clear advantages and disadvantages of the two modes of interaction, friends can alternatively socialize with one another face to face and via the Internet. Socializing online, however popular it can be, cannot play the same role as human contact. Therefore, face-to-face interaction will never go out of fashion.
（310 words)

                                                                

 

“ Many young people in the workforce today change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?”

                           

解析&审题

本周是一个大家都非常熟悉的话题，类似的话题曾经在2010年6月19日、2014年4月5日、2017年9月16日出现过。

在过去，更换一次工作是很难的，多数人都是在一个岗位上工作到退休，但现在刚毕业几年的年轻人如果没有换几次工作都会觉得自己吃亏了。那么，这到底是什么原因造成的呢？对于这种原因分析的题目，唐老师建议大家还是从三个层次（即物质层次、心理层次和社会层次）去思考，就容易把思路梳理得比较有条理。就年轻人更换工作而言

个理由肯定是为了挣取更高的工资，获得更好的发展机会；

其次，从心理上讲，很多年轻人愿意去尝试新工作，认为这样可以结识不同领域的朋友，增加人生体验；

最后，从社会角度看，由于服务行业的兴旺，电脑技术的发展，客观上也为年轻人频繁更换工作创造了可能性。

那么，频繁更换工作对年轻人来说是好还是坏呢？从好处上讲，这的确可以增加年轻人的工作经历，从而提高他们未来在就业市场上的竞争力，但也有坏处，比如无法在某个领域成为最的，从而失去更多发展机会。
本题审题时，要专注两个关键词，即“年轻人”和“频繁更换工作”。以下是本题高分范文。

老师笔记

01

Not long ago, most people would choose to stay on the same jobfor the entire life, but today young people prefer to try different things and hop from one job to another.

不久以前，大多数人都会选择终生从事同一份工作，但今天的年轻人更喜欢尝试不同的事情，从一份工作跳到另一份工作。

解析
（1） 本段直接进入话题，用过去和现在的对比来提出下文讨论的现象：年轻人不停更换工作。
（2） stay on the same job 坚持做同一份工作
（3） hop from one job to another 从一份工作跳到另一份工作

02

In my view, there mainly are three reasons why young people are doing so. At the most basic level, young people find that frequent job changing can often bring them the pay rise they expect. My friend Edward is a perfect example. As a program designer, he has worked for three different companies in the past five years, and now he earns almost five times as much as he did in the first company. This would not have been possible if he had not been mobile enough. The second reason is that by doing different jobs or careers, young people can increase their work experience and eventually become more versatile. This may give them a competitive edge, especially in today’s job market where an all-round employee is always preferred. Finally, changing jobs frequently nowadays has been made possible by the boomingservice industry and rapidly developing information technology and transport.

在我看来，年轻人之所以这样做，主要有三个原因。在最基本的层面上，年轻人发现频繁换工作往往会给他们带来期望的加薪。我的朋友爱德华就是个完美的例子。作为一名程序设计师，他在过去五年里为三家不同的公司工作过，现在他的收入几乎是家公司的五倍。如果他不是如此频繁地变动，那是不可能的。第二个原因是，通过做不同的工作或职业，年轻人可以增加他们的工作经验，并最终变得更多才多艺。这可能会给他们一个竞争优势，特别是在当今的就业市场上，一个全面的员工总是被青睐的。最后，由于蓬勃发展的服务业和迅速发展的信息技术和运输，如今频繁更换工作已经成为可能。

解析
（1） 本段论述年轻人不停更换工作的三个原因，分别为物质原因（能挣更高工资，举例论证）、心理原因（增加工作经验+结果分析），社会原因（服务业、信息技术和交通的发展）。
（2） at the most basic level 在最基本的层面上
（3） versatile 全能的
（4） give sb. a competitive edge 给某人竞争优势
（5） booming 蓬勃发展的

                                     

03

Needless to say, job-hopping may be a bad thing if it is not well-considered. Shifting from job to job may prove to be a waste of time and opportunity since this may easily make a person Jack of all trades and master of none. As we know, the person who can provide the most professional service for the company enjoys the best opportunity of promotion. However, if a person does not find the job he is doing interesting or fulfilling, then his change job could be a win-win strategy both for the companies and employees. For the companies, “new bloods” often mean stronger labor force and vitality of the staff. For the employees, a new job means a new opportunity.

不用说，跳槽可能是一件坏事，如果没有没有好好考虑的话。从一份工作转到另一份工作可能是浪费时间和机会，因为这可能很容易使一个人成为万金油，但一无所专。我们知道，能够为公司提供最专业服务的人享有的晋升机会。但是，如果一个人发现他所从事工作没有意义或没有成就感，那么他换工作对公司和员工来说都是双赢的策略。对公司来说，“新血液”通常意味着更强大的劳动力和活力。对员工来说，新的工作意味着新的机会。

解析
（1）本段讨论改换工作的坏处（无法专门做好一件事情）和好处（摆脱自己不喜欢的工作）。
（2）jack of all trades and master of none 什么都会但什么都不专的人
（3）fulfilling 有成就感的

04

In light of the above discussion, I would conclude that no change of jobs is wasteful as long as it is carefully considered. Holding on to a job that we do not like is a crime against our precious life.

根据以上的讨论，我认为只要仔细考虑，换工作是不会浪费的。坚持一份我们不喜欢的工作是对我们宝贵生命的一种犯罪。

解析
（1）本段是结论，明确提出自己的观点。
（2）in light of 依据
（3）hold on to... 牢牢抱住；坚持

 

雅思7分范文
Not long ago, most people would choose to stay on the same job for the entire life, but today young people prefer to try different things and hop from one job to another.

In my view, there mainly are three reasons why young people are doing so. At the most basic level, young people find that frequent job changing can often bring them the pay rise they expect. My friend Edward is a perfect example. As a program designer, he has worked for three different companies in the past five years, and now he earns almost five times as much as he did in the first company. This would not have been possible if he had not been mobile enough. The second reason is that by doing different jobs or careers, young people can increase their work experience and eventually become more versatile. This may give them a competitive edge, especially in today’s job market where an all-round employee is always preferred. Finally, changing jobs frequently nowadays has been made possible by the booming service industry and rapidly developing information technology and transport.

Needless to say, job-hopping may be a bad thing if it is not well-considered. Shifting from job to job may prove to be a waste of time and opportunity since this may easily make a person Jack of all trades and master of none. As we know, the person who can provide the most professional service for the company enjoys the best opportunity of promotion. However, if a person does not find the job he is doing interesting or fulfilling, then his change job could be a win-win strategy both for the companies and employees. For the companies, “new bloods” often mean stronger labor force and vitality of the staff. For the employees, a new job means a new opportunity.

In light of the above discussion, I would conclude that no change of jobs is wasteful as long as it is carefully considered. Holding on to a job that we do not like is a crime against our precious life.
（347 words)

                           

 

 

2018年6月23日雅思大作文题目

“More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons behind this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.”

 

解析&审题

本周雅思考试作文题目是2013年11月30日的原题重现。最近的雅思考试作文，2013-2015年的原题复现率比较高，请各位烤鸭重点复习这几年的真题。

喜欢衣服，汽车和其他产品，这已经成为越来越多人的习惯。那么，到底是什么原因让人们如此喜欢呢？我们当然也可以从物质、心理和社会三个层面来加以考察。

物质方面，知名品牌的质量一般说来更好，更值得信赖；
心理方面，知名品牌能给人带来自我满足感；
社会方面，使用知名品牌容易获得别人的信任。
至于这种趋势是好还是坏，大家可以根据自己的理解进行选择论述。比如，我们可以认为这是一种坏的趋势：

首先，追求会让我们花掉更多钱，而这些钱完全可以用来更好地保护我们的身体或者投资教育；
其次，追求会让我们变成心理扭曲的消费者；
再次，如果人人都看重品牌，那么这个社会就会变得很势利，买不起产品的人难以得到社会的尊重，从而让社会变得不公正。

老师笔记

01

Is a famous brand a matter of identity or vanity? There are reasons to explain why more and more people want to buy brand names. However, to my mind, this trend is a negative development.

是身份问题还是虚荣心问题？我们有理由解释为什么越来越多的人想买。然而，在我看来，这个趋势是不利的。

解析
（1） 本段直接进入话题，同时明确给出自己的观点。
（2） identity 身份
（3） vanity 虚荣
（4） to my mind 在我看来

02

Although people who are not vanity-conscious generally buy off-brands for price benefits, many consumers buy brand names for a variety of reasons: quality confidence, social acceptance, and customer loyalty. Firstly, recognized brand names usually have shown a consistency in product quality that has contributed to the evolution of the brand, and for this reason consumers rely onprior experiences or public word-of-mouth when selecting famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. Secondly, people have a desire to fit in, whether at work or in social circles, and so people want to buy famous brands as they believe that the brands will contribute to greater social acceptance. Thirdly, consumers develop loyalty to particular brands that provide a consistent, high-quality experience, and that loyalty is essentially an emotional attachment to a brand.

虽然没有虚荣心的人通常为了价格利益而购买非品牌，但许多消费者购买品牌，原因有很多：质量自信、社会接受和顾客忠诚度。首先，公认的通常表现出产品质量的一致性，而这一致性促成了品牌的形成，因此消费者依靠以前的经验或者口碑来选择服装、汽车和其他商品。其次，无论是在工作场合，还是在社会圈子，人们都渴望融入，所以人们想买，因为他们相信，品牌将有助于更好地被社会接受。第三，消费者对那些提供一贯高质量体验的特定品牌有忠诚度，而这份忠诚度本质上是一种对品牌的情感依恋。

解析
（1） 本段论述人们购买的三个理由：质量、社会接受和品牌忠诚度。
（2） off-brands 过季的品牌
（3） a variety of 多种多样的
（4） loyalty 忠诚
（5） consistency 一致性
（6） evolution 进化
（7） prior 先前的
（8） social acceptance 社会接受度

 

03

Although buying famous names is necessary for some special purposes, I believe it is generally a negative development. We all know that the product with a famous name is usually a lot more expensive than its less known counterpart, which means we have to pay much more for it. Besides, the strong desire for famous brands may turn us into irrational consumers and prompt us to try all, even illegal, means to buy them. Finally, if everybody in the society worships the famous brands, then the world may become an unjust place to live in because people will develop a biasedcontempt to those who cannot afford these brands.

虽然为了某些特殊目的购买是必要的，但我认为这个趋势从总体上看是负面的。我们都知道产品比其不知名的同类产品通常要昂贵得多，这意味着我们得为此付出更多的代价。此外，对的强烈渴望可能会使我们变成非理性的消费者，促使我们去尝试所有的，甚至是非法的，手段来买下它们。最后，如果社会上的每个人都崇拜，那么世界就可能成为一个不公平的地方，因为人们会对那些买不起的人产生偏见。

解析
（1）本段讨论为什么热衷品牌是负面的：付出更多金钱，非理性消费，导致不公平的社会。
（2）counterpart 对等的人或物
（3）irrational 不理性的
（4）prompt 促使
（5）worship 崇拜
（6）biased 有偏见的
（7）contempt 轻视；看不起

04

In conclusion, though more and more people prefer famous brands for one reason or another, personally I do not think much of this trend. The craze for famous brands, in my view, is harmful to both individuals and the society as a whole.

总之，虽然越来越多的人因为某种原因而更喜欢，但我个人并不很看好这一趋势。在我看来，对的狂热对个人和整个社会都是有害的。

解析
（1）本段是结论，明确提出自己的观点。
（2）craze 疯狂
（3）as a whole 作为整体地

 

雅思7分范文
Is a famous brand a matter of identity or vanity? There are reasons to explain why more and more people want to buy brand names. However, to my mind, this trend is a negative development.
 
Although people who are not vanity-conscious generally buy off-brands for price benefits, many consumers buy brand names for a variety of reasons: quality confidence, social acceptance, and customer loyalty. Firstly, recognized brand names usually have shown a consistency in product quality that has contributed to the evolution of the brand, and for this reason consumers rely on prior experiences or public word-of-mouth when selecting famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. Secondly, people have a desire to fit in, whether at work or in social circles, and so people want to buy famous brands as they believe that the brands will contribute to greater social acceptance. Thirdly, consumers develop loyalty to particular brands that provide a consistent, high-quality experience, and that loyalty is essentially an emotional attachment to a brand.
 
Although buying famous names is necessary for some special purposes, I believe it is generally a negative development. We all know that the product with a famous name is usually a lot more expensive than its less known counterpart, which means we have to pay much more for it. Besides, the strong desire for famous brands may turn us into irrational consumers and prompt us to try all, even illegal, means to buy them. Finally, if everybody in the society worships the famous brands, then the world may become an unjust place to live in because people will develop a biased contempt to those who cannot afford these brands.
 
In conclusion, though more and more people prefer famous brands for one reason or another, personally I do not think much of this trend. The craze for famous brands, in my view, is harmful to both individuals and the society as a whole.
(318 words)

                                                                       
2018年6月30日雅思大作文题目

“An increasing number of people are changing their careers during their working time. What causes this trend and is it a positive or negative development for society?”

                                   

解析&审题

6月30日的雅思大作文与本月7日的雅思大作文题目一样，主题都是年轻人频繁更换工作的原因及优劣势。这是一个大家都非常熟悉的话题，类似的话题曾经在2010年6月19日、2014年4月5日、2017年9月16日出现过。

在过去，更换一次工作是很难的，多数人都是在一个岗位上工作到退休，但现在刚毕业几年的年轻人如果没有换几次工作都会觉得自己吃亏了。那么，这到底是什么原因造成的呢？对于这种原因分析的题目，唐老师建议大家还是从三个层次（即物质层次、心理层次和社会层次）去思考，就容易把思路梳理得比较有条理。就年轻人更换工作而言

个理由肯定是为了挣取更高的工资，获得更好的发展机会；

其次，从心理上讲，很多年轻人愿意去尝试新工作，认为这样可以结识不同领域的朋友，增加人生体验；

最后，从社会角度看，由于服务行业的兴旺，电脑技术的发展，客观上也为年轻人频繁更换工作创造了可能性。

那么，频繁更换工作对年轻人来说是好还是坏呢？从好处上讲，这的确可以增加年轻人的工作经历，从而提高他们未来在就业市场上的竞争力，但也有坏处，比如无法在某个领域成为最的，从而失去更多发展机会。
本题审题时，要专注两个关键词，即“年轻人”和“频繁更换工作”。以下是本题高分范文。

老师笔记

01

Not long ago, most people would choose to stay on the same job for the entire life, but today young people prefer to try different things and hop from one job to another.

不久以前，大多数人都会选择终生从事同一份工作，但今天的年轻人更喜欢尝试不同的事情，从一份工作跳到另一份工作。

解析
（1） 本段直接进入话题，用过去和现在的对比来提出下文讨论的现象：年轻人不停更换工作。
（2） stay on the same job 坚持做同一份工作
（3） hop from one job to another 从一份工作跳到另一份工作

02

In my view, there mainly are three reasons why young people are doing so. At the most basic level, young people find that frequent job changing can often bring them the pay rise they expect. My friend Edward is a perfect example. As a program designer, he has worked for three different companies in the past five years, and now he earns almost five times as much as he did in the first company. This would not have been possible if he had not been mobile enough. The second reason is that by doing different jobs or careers, young people can increase their work experience and eventually become more versatile. This may give them a competitive edge, especially in today’s job market where an all-round employee is always preferred. Finally, changing jobs frequently nowadays has been made possible by the booming service industry and rapidly developing information technology and transport.

在我看来，年轻人之所以这样做，主要有三个原因。在最基本的层面上，年轻人发现频繁换工作往往会给他们带来期望的加薪。我的朋友爱德华就是个完美的例子。作为一名程序设计师，他在过去五年里为三家不同的公司工作过，现在他的收入几乎是家公司的五倍。如果他不是如此频繁地变动，那是不可能的。第二个原因是，通过做不同的工作或职业，年轻人可以增加他们的工作经验，并最终变得更多才多艺。这可能会给他们一个竞争优势，特别是在当今的就业市场上，一个全面的员工总是被青睐的。最后，由于蓬勃发展的服务业和迅速发展的信息技术和运输，如今频繁更换工作已经成为可能。

解析
（1） 本段论述年轻人不停更换工作的三个原因，分别为物质原因（能挣更高工资，举例论证）、心理原因（增加工作经验+结果分析），社会原因（服务业、信息技术和交通的发展）。
（2） at the most basic level 在最基本的层面上
（3） versatile 全能的
（4） give sb. a competitive edge 给某人竞争优势
（5） booming 蓬勃发展的

                                    

03

Needless to say, job-hopping may be a bad thing if it is not well-considered. Shifting from job to job may prove to be a waste of time and opportunity since this may easily make a person Jack of all trades and master of none. As we know, the person who can provide the most professional service for the company enjoys the best opportunity of promotion. However, if a person does not find the job he is doing interesting or fulfilling, then his change job could be a win-win strategy both for the companies and employees. For the companies, “new bloods” often mean stronger labor force and vitality of the staff. For the employees, a new job means a new opportunity.

不用说，跳槽可能是一件坏事，如果没有没有好好考虑的话。从一份工作转到另一份工作可能是浪费时间和机会，因为这可能很容易使一个人成为万金油，但一无所专。我们知道，能够为公司提供最专业服务的人享有的晋升机会。但是，如果一个人发现他所从事工作没有意义或没有成就感，那么他换工作对公司和员工来说都是双赢的策略。对公司来说，“新血液”通常意味着更强大的劳动力和活力。对员工来说，新的工作意味着新的机会。

解析
（1）本段讨论改换工作的坏处（无法专门做好一件事情）和好处（摆脱自己不喜欢的工作）。
（2）jack of all trades and master of none 什么都会但什么都不专的人
（3）fulfilling 有成就感的

04

In light of the above discussion, I would conclude that no change of jobs is wasteful as long as it is carefully considered. Holding on to a job that we do not like is a crime against our precious life.

根据以上的讨论，我认为只要仔细考虑，换工作是不会浪费的。坚持一份我们不喜欢的工作是对我们宝贵生命的一种犯罪。

解析
（1）本段是结论，明确提出自己的观点。
（2）in light of 依据
（3）hold on to... 牢牢抱住；坚持

 

雅思7分范文
Not long ago, most people would choose to stay on the same job for the entire life, but today young people prefer to try different things and hop from one job to another.

In my view, there mainly are three reasons why young people are doing so. At the most basic level, young people find that frequent job changing can often bring them the pay rise they expect. My friend Edward is a perfect example. As a program designer, he has worked for three different companies in the past five years, and now he earns almost five times as much as he did in the first company. This would not have been possible if he had not been mobile enough. The second reason is that by doing different jobs or careers, young people can increase their work experience and eventually become more versatile. This may give them a competitive edge, especially in today’s job market where an all-round employee is always preferred. Finally, changing jobs frequently nowadays has been made possible by the booming service industry and rapidly developing information technology and transport.

Needless to say, job-hopping may be a bad thing if it is not well-considered. Shifting from job to job may prove to be a waste of time and opportunity since this may easily make a person Jack of all trades and master of none. As we know, the person who can provide the most professional service for the company enjoys the best opportunity of promotion. However, if a person does not find the job he is doing interesting or fulfilling, then his change job could be a win-win strategy both for the companies and employees. For the companies, “new bloods” often mean stronger labor force and vitality of the staff. For the employees, a new job means a new opportunity.

In light of the above discussion, I would conclude that no change of jobs is wasteful as long as it is carefully considered. Holding on to a job that we do not like is a crime against our precious life.
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