2018年10月雅思大小作文合辑

2018年10月11日雅思考试大作文题目

 

Recent years witnessed a criticism that the disparity in access to advanced education still exists between rural and urban regions, especially when the equal education chances are emphasized in some poor areas. Personally, the situation that differences in educational resources do need to be solved urgently. 【话语需要简洁一些。】

Recent years are witnessing a growing criticism on the unequal access to tertiaryeducation. Students from rural areas are less likely to be admitted than are urban students. Personally, I believe that the inequality does need to be resolvedurgently.

The first reason is that due to the lack qualified teachers and sufficient facilities in rural high school, only a minority of university students come from rural backgrounds.【TR方面：“穷困”不是理由，“能克服穷困”才是理由。】For example, without the correct guidance and the abundant knowledge accomulation, students could not get the qualifications to go to universities, which means being a more skillful person in the future could be quite impossible. 【TR方面：ta们的“无能”不是理由。】Second, although some hardworking students may overcome the barriers of examinations, suffering from the notoriously expensive tuition fee, they finally choose to give up since it could definitely be a financial challenge to their families. So in short, what measures should we do to handle this problem?

The first reason is that the easier access to college education would be an award for those students from the rural background, most likelyunprivileged students, whose desire for knowledge and ability to overcome the difficulty are admirable. If those students had 【虚拟，说明“没有”】abundant educational resources, including qualified teachers, state-of-the-art facilities, and an updated curriculum, they wouldoutperform themselves who suffer the inadequate resources but manage to achieve acceptable levels. 【GRA方面：每个body段落有一个长难句即可。】【LR方面：表述正/负评价的词汇。】

Second, although some hardworking students may overcome the barriers of examinations, suffering from the notoriously expensive tuition fee, they finally choose to give up since it could definitely be a financial challenge to their families. 【TR方面：理由的核心意思不明确。】

【TR方面：城里的学生可能会觉得自己能上大学是天赋和家庭条件所致，可能不会感激社会；农村的学生因为收到关照而有机会上大学，可能将来会怀抱感恩之心报答社会。】

Second, the institutions’ generosity can be appreciated by those beneficiaries. The disadvantaged groups, since they receive aid without which they would not be in college, are highly likely to show gratitude to the favor and to pay thedebt when they one day become capable. They are unlike urban students, theungrateful privileged youngsters, who tend to take their opportunity for granted. For example, their charitable actions inspired by their universities’ kindness to them, many philanthropists from a humble rural background are generous in giving back to society.

So in short, what measures should we do to handle this problem? To begin with, institutions of higher education, including the most selective colleges and universities, have to think about ways to recruit students from rural communities and enhance services to retain those less fortunate undergraduates. As a beginning step, it is necessary for government authorities in charge to help establish partnerships between high schools and universities, thus creating a fast track for more rural students to be enrolled through some special admission process. In addition, governments should make it a policy to reserve a certain percentage of entry into an undergraduate course. 【TR方面：凉了，都是废话，题目没有问“怎么办”。】

In conclusion, effective measures should be implement to make it less difficult for rural students to pursue universities studies. As a principle of equality for all, each student should not be left behind. Otherwise, there will be a widening gap between students who are from cities and those who are not. 【body凉，conclusion铁凉】

In conclusion, easier admission should be available for students from rural backgrounds for at least two reasons. These youngsters deserve the opportunity and will appreciate the opportunity. 【通过deserve和appreciate两个动词笼统总结全文。】

 

2018年10月13日雅思考试大作文题目

【立场：利大于弊】

优势：1、母乳喂奶对母子都是好事；2、身心恢复。

缺点：1、离开工作太久，职场受阻。

 

箭头：整段重整后的样子

Women, as long as since they would can be vulnerable physically and mentally after finishing childbirth, should all be engaged into a allowed to maternity leave take some time off work. In many countries, allowing female employees to take a break of a few months break and look after their babies 【主语嫌长，不是英语习惯】 is a basic right 【“休假”是权利，“允许”不是权利】 → it is a basic entitlement that females have a time of reasonable length to recover and look after the infants, and it seems to be the best solution to balance their work and health. 【赘述】Personally, I believe there can be more beneficial consequences than passive the negative effects.

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Maternity leave is legally available in some countries and practiced.【“引入”环节一定要快】 I think that it has multiple benefits and only a few drawbacks. 【multiple对应 a few避开无聊的比较级也能表明孰多孰少】

【开头结束了，快快快，加快信息节奏】

First, the availability of a few-months leave 【语言要“扁平”一些】 leaving work for a time of reasonable length ensures that their infantscould definitely be are taken good care of well attended. During this time, women can dedicate themselves into to their babies and also prevent them from some unpredictable danger which may imperil lives 【赘述】. Meanwhile, 【文脉在此处不顺】 Experts advocate that breastfeeding has more benefits for both babies and mothers, since itwas is an original instinct and nobody have has the ability to replacethem the mothers. By doing this, the attachment / bond that forms【多余】between them can be strengthened , which is for the reason that the newborn has a vital psychological need for the mother’s attention.

→【内容不变，调整语序】

First, experts point out that breast milk is beneficial for the babies. Sinceit is only the mothers who can breastfeed the infants【状语从句里的强调句】，the leave is necessary for the sake of children’s health. Experts also say that mothers too benefit from breastfeeding. For example, breast cancer is less likely, and the chance of obesity after giving birthdiminishes. In addition, it is believed that breastfeeding strengthens the bond between a child and the parent.

Second, newly new mothers are therefore more likely to recover after production. They can achieve have more 【不要乱用比较级】time to take a good rest and fully recover from the hardship of pregnancy and production. It is a common sense that the birth of a baby indicates the conscientious childcare from his or her mother, which leads to arduous and energy-consuming efforts. 【嗯？】

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Second, the few months are needed also because it takes time for the new mothers to recover. During the time, women restore their energy 【细化recover】since childbirth consumes too much physically, and they also return to their best state 【细化recover】mentally. 【篇幅不用再延展了，后面还有drawback要写呢，不愁字数不够】

However 【转折意义的逻辑衔接词等于在否定上面的两点advantages，和你的立场相悖了】 Admittedly, the existence【语言不“扁平”】of some negative effects should not be overlooked. Taking maternity leave means sometimes women may suffer from  【此处语意重了】be at the risk of losing their jobs, especially during an economic downturn when the job market is in recession. Also, this behavior can impact a woman’s career development, as they may find it hard to readapt to the previous work environment after the gap, or her position may be replaced 【“岗位”不会被取代，“人”被取代】filled 【“岗位”被填上】by another personpermanently.

In conclusion, the policy or law of maternity benefits all female employees and their families in most cases. and some passive results accompanied by this should also be thought highly of Although the disadvantages cannot be disregarded, they are minor effects.

 

2018年10月20日

雅思大作文题目

 

“ Report shows that it is increasingly expensive to keep museums open to public. Find the best way to fund museums among these funding possibilities—governments, businesses, individuals.  

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.”

 

解析&审题

本题是一个关于博物馆新题。在以往的雅思作文中，关于博物馆的话题多集中在：（1）怎样鼓励本地人去博物馆？（2）在网络时代下博物馆是否还有必要；（3）博物馆是否应该收门票？本次的问题则转换了角度：博物馆应该从哪里获得资助，政府还是个人？

本次考试的提问方式可能也让很多同学懵圈。按照以往雅思作文的提问方式，本作文可以这样问：有人认为资助博物馆的非常好方式是政府投资，其他人则认为个人捐款才是非常好的方式，请给出你的观点。如果这样提问，很多同学可能就不会那么困惑了。其实，不管题目怎样问，我们的同学在审题的时候，都要先努力搞清楚题目到底要求我们讨论什么。比如，本题要求“在所有可能的方式中，找到非常好的资助方式—政府、企业还是个人”，那其实很显然，题目要求你去比较这三种方式，然后提出非常好的办法。

在本范文中，唐老师认为政府投资永远是博物馆获得资助的方式；企业和个人捐款虽然可以解决政府投资不足的难题，但往往有个人的需要从而损害博物馆的公众形象。朝着思路写，本题迎刃而解。各位烤鸭，你是这样写的吗？

接下来请阅读唐老师提供的高分范文，看看唐老师的具体语言表达。

老师笔记

 

01

Many museums have been faced with financial problems over the past years of recession and lagging economic recovery. As it is increasingly expensive to maintain museums, sufficient money must be raised from both government sources and private (either businesses or individuals) donations, in order to keep them open to public.

在过去几年的经济衰退和缓慢的经济复苏中，许多博物馆都面临着财政问题。由于维持博物馆的费用越来越高，为使其向公众开放，必须要筹集足够的资金，不管是来自政府来源还是私人(企业或个人)捐款。

解析

（1） 段提出话题：博物馆需要从政府或者个人获得资金来维持运转。

（2） be faced with... 面临......

（3） recession 倒退

（4） lagging 落后的；缓慢的

（5） maintain 维持；维修

 

02

Investment from governments must form a bigger proportion of the income of many museums at different levels. As a major way to fund museums, the public sector should always do more, and there may be no substitutes for the government support for museums, especially in the long-lasting financial crisis when that government support is more urgently needed. Although, in the face of such adversity, museums have shown great resilience and creativity in generating new sources of revenue, those troubled institutions can only be sustained with stronger government backing. Considering that museums preserve a country’s collective memory for future generations, the importance of public funding in museums could never be overestimated.

来自政府的投资必须在各级博物馆的收入中占更大的比例。作为资助博物馆的一种主要方式，公共部门应该总是做得更多，政府对博物馆的支持也许是无可替代的，尤其是在长期的金融危机中，更迫切需要政府的财政支持。尽管面对这样的困境，博物馆在获得新的收入来源方面表现出极大的弹性和创造力，但对于那些陷入困境的机构只有在政府的支持下才能维持下去。考虑到博物馆为子孙后代保存一个国家的集体记忆，博物馆公共资金的重要性再怎么估计也不为过。

解析

（1） 本段主要论述政府投资的重要性，以及原因。

（2） proportion 部分

（3） substitute 替代品

（4） urgently 急迫地

（5） adversity 不利的环境；对手

（6） resilience 弹性

（7） generate 产生

（8） sustain 持续；维持

（9） overestimate 过高估计

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Private donations also occupy an important part in keeping a museum, especially when government funding is limited. This way of funding can be done by providing money for new programs and spaces, as well as giving works of art as gifts to the museum’s collections. The museums may in turn tailor themselves to the needs of the donors byaffording certain privileges to them, including the right to use the museum’s space to hold some special events such as promotion campaigns. This has given rise to complaints and worries in the general public that receiving individual donations may leave the museums ruined.

私人捐款在博物馆的保存中也占有重要的地位，特别是在政府资金有限的情况下。这种资助方式可以通过为新的项目和空间提供资金，或把艺术品赠送给博物馆收藏来实现。反过来，博物馆也可以根据捐款者的需要进行调整，给予他们一定的特权，包括使用博物馆举办一些特别活动，如宣传活动。这已引起普通市民的投诉和忧虑，担心接受个人捐赠可能毁掉博物馆。

解析

（1） 本段主要论述私人捐款的作用及其问题：好处是补充政府投资，坏处是可能损坏博物馆。

（2） occupy 占据

（3） in turn 反过来

（4） tailor oneself to the needs of... 调整自己以适应......的需求

（5） afford 给与

（6） give rise to... 引起

 

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In my view, among all the funding possibilities, government funding should always remain the best way of operating a museum, because it can ensure the maximum independence of the museum as an institution to educate the public. Donations from the private sector are necessary only when the museum cannot obtain sufficient support from the government and are acceptable only on the condition that they do not interfere with the public roles of the museum.

在我看来，在所有的资助可能性中，政府的资助应该始终是博物馆运作的方式，因为它可以非常大限度地博物馆作为一个教育公众机构的独立性。只有当博物馆不能获得足够的政府支持时，私人领域的捐赠才是必要的，而且只有在不妨碍博物馆的公众功能的条件下才能接受。

解析

（1） 本段给出自己的观点：政府资助是办法，同时提出接受私人捐赠的两个前提：政府资助不够，私人不妨碍博物馆的正常功能。

（2） operate 运作；操作

（3） ensure

（4） maximum 非常大的

（5） sufficient 足够的

（6） on the condition that... 以......为条件

（7） interfere with 干涉；妨碍

 

2018年10月27日

雅思大作文题目

 

“ Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their family instead of entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ”

解析&审题

本周大作文是一个关于年轻人的生活话题：年轻人到底应该是多和家人在一起，还是应该多在外面寻找乐趣？也许有些同学会单方面地认为年轻人应该多与家人在一起。但其实，这个题目非常好做双边讨论，因为年轻人一方面需要在家里培养与家人的感情，但另一方面，年轻人也应该去外面参加一些娱乐活动以疏导内心的压力，或者发展自己的兴趣爱好等。

唐老师在与很多烤鸭交流的过程中发现，同学们喜欢采取非此即彼的思维方式，即采用一边倒的结构方式。这种方式也不是不正确，甚至有些题目用这种方式写起来更顺畅，但我们千万不要忘记，如果题目中有两个对立的观点，我们必须要对他们都进行讨论。即使在一边倒的结构中，我们也要对对立的观点进行驳斥，不能对其置之不理。如果你对题目中给出的反方观点置之不理，你在Task Response这一项上就会丢分。

接下来请阅读唐老师提供的高分范文，看看唐老师怎样具体用语言来表达以上观点。

 

老师笔记

 

01

Today’s young people tend to see themselves as the masters of their own free time, and they can do whatever they want to do. In my opinion, however, parents need to help the youngsters toexercise their freedom in a more balanced way,consciously between family love and entertainment fun.

今天的年轻人倾向于把自己看作是自己空闲时间的主人，他们可以做任何他们想做的事情。然而，在我看来，父母需要帮助孩子们有意识地在家人之爱和娱乐休闲之间以一种更加平衡的方式来行使他们的自由。

解析

（1） 段提出话题，并提出自己的观点。

（2） exercise 行使；练习

（3） balanced 均衡的

（4） consciously 有意识地

 

02

On the one hand, enjoying quality time together is very important for a strong family. It is because the more opportunities the family have for quality time, the stronger the family are in terms of emotional bond. The family activities that young people canengage in include eating meals together, talking about the events of the day, sharing joys and defeats, doing household chores together and spending evenings watching TV. All these things can send a strong message of family love, which is theoverall positive side about juveniles staying more at home. To some, these activities may seem not always necessary, but without them, it is impossible for young people to learn to love the family. 

一方面，在一起享受美好时光对于一个团结的家庭来说是非常重要的。这是因为家庭拥有美好时间的机会越多，家庭的情感纽带就越强。年轻人可以参加的家庭活动包括一起吃饭，谈论一天中的事情，分享快乐和失败，一起做家务，晚上看电视，等。所有这些都能传递出强烈的家人之爱的信息，而这正是青少年多住在家里的积极一面。对一些人来说，这些活动似乎并非总是必要的，但没有他们，年轻人不可能学会如何爱家人。

解析

（1） 本段主要论述孩子们多与家人一起的重要性。本段没有列举各种重要性，而是将重点放在“家人之爱”（family love）这一点上。

（2） bond 纽带

（3） engage in 从事

（4） household chores 家务活

（5） overall 整体的

（6） juvenile 青少年（的）

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On the other hand, the younger generation may want their fun time outside and get away from the boring daily routine. This is also important because young people are full of energy which needs to be channeled in positive forms. For example, shopping in malls or going to parties can be a good form that helps young people to grow up healthily from adolescence to adulthood by making them more independent and responsible. In fact, they need to do things for fun, in order to explore their own interests or make friends. Of course, when going to extremes, this trend might bring negative effects, including the widening of generation gap between parents and children.

另一方面，年轻一代可能希望在外面度过快乐时光，远离无聊的日常生活。这一点也很重要，因为年轻人充满了精力，需要以积极的形式加以疏导。例如，在购物中心购物或参加聚会是一种很好的方式，可以帮助年轻人更独立，更有责任心，从而帮助他们从青春期到成年的健康成长。事实上，为了探索自己的兴趣或交朋友，他们需要做一些有趣的事情。当然，当走向极端时，这种趋势可能会带来负面影响，包括父母和孩子之间代沟的扩大。

解析

（1） 本段主要论述年轻人应该在外参加娱乐活动的原因：摆脱无聊的日常琐事；疏导能量，健康成长；发展兴趣交朋友。

（2） routine 日常需要做的事情

（3） channel 渠道；疏导

（4） adolescence 青春期

（5） explore 发现；探索

 

04

In conclusion, there are positive effects about young people who spend their free time for both family love and entertainment fun. Parents need to see to it that youth under their care should live a more balanced life. Young people themselves also need to be prudent in making their choices.

总之，把空闲时间花在家人之爱和娱乐休闲上，对年轻人来说都有好处。父母需要他们照顾下的年轻人能过一种更加均衡的生活，年轻人自己在作出选择时也需要谨慎。

解析

（1） 本段给出自己的观点：两种做法都有好处，因此应该均衡。

（2） see to it that... 为......负责；......

（3） prudent 谨慎的

 

7分范文

Today’s young people tend to see themselves as the masters of their own free time, and they can do whatever they want to do. In my opinion, however, parents need to help the youngsters to exercise their freedom in a more balanced way, consciously between family love and entertainment fun.

On the one hand, enjoying quality time together is very important for a strong family. It is because the more opportunities the family have for quality time, the stronger the family are in terms of emotional bond. The family activities that young people can engage in include eating meals together, talking about the events of the day, sharing joys and defeats, doing household chores together and spending evenings watching TV. All these things can send a strong message of family love, which is the overall positive side about juveniles staying more at home. To some, these activities may seem not always necessary, but without them, it is impossible for young people to learn to love the family.

On the other hand, the younger generation may want their fun time outside and get away from the boring daily routine. This is also important because young people are full of energy which needs to be channeled in positive forms. For example, shopping in malls or going to parties can be a good form that helps young people to grow up healthily from adolescence to adulthood by making them more independent and responsible. In fact, they need to do things for fun, in order to explore their own interests or make friends. Of course, when going to extremes, this trend might bring negative effects, including the widening of generation gap between parents and children.

In conclusion, there are positive effects about young people who spend their free time for both family love and entertainment fun. Parents need to see to it that youth under their care should live a more balanced life. Young people themselves also need to be prudent in making their choices.

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建议背诵的句子

 

1. In my opinion, however, parents need to help the youngsters toexercise their freedom in a more balanced way,consciously between family love and entertainment fun.

然而，在我看来，父母需要帮助孩子们有意识地在家人之爱和娱乐休闲之间以一种更加平衡的方式来行使他们的自由。

2. The more opportunities the family have for quality time, the stronger the family are in terms of emotional bond.

家庭拥有美好时间的机会越多，家庭的情感纽带就越强。

3. Shopping in malls or going to parties can be a good form that helps young people to grow up healthily from adolescence to adulthood by making them more independent and responsible.

在购物中心购物或参加聚会是一种很好的方式，可以帮助年轻人更独立，更有责任心，从而帮助他们从青春期到成年的健康成长。

4. Parents need to see to it that youth under their care should live a more balanced life.

父母需要他们照顾下的年轻人能过一种更加均衡的生活。

 

 

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