常州雅思培训老师分享2018年12月雅思大作文合集

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12月8日真题（写作细节）：

Some people believe that schools should choose their students according to their abilities. Others think that students with different abilities should learn together.Discuss both of the views and give your opinion.

【Introduction】

There have been proposals that students should be divided and grouped according to their abilities, including how capable they are respectively.  前一句话把信息交待清楚完善，后一句话就依托前一句话所建立起来的语境写个短句【写作法：语句间的配合】 There has meanwhile been opposition. If I had to take one side, I would choose the former. 喜欢套话么？这一句就是。

【以Body部分的一个Paragraph为例，分解写作如下】

First, the divided admission is favorable to both teaching and learning, and the one-group arrangement may be unfavorable.  中心句之后，讨论“为什么”/“怎么样” One circumstance is when students’ scholastic aptitudes are at the same high level, there is no waiting for the slow-movers, whose response can take forever, and the progress of teaching is smooth.  语法/句法：长难句：主句的表语部分是个名词性从句，名词行从句又由状语从句和复合句组成  By contrast, in a classroom where students’ abilities vary, 语法/句法：换用介词短语的状语形式，不同于上一句的when引到的状语从句 teachers need to do the juggling and may still be too fast or too slow for certain students, under which circumstance 语法/句法：主句的内容再作为从句的状语信息 the flow of teaching is never appropriate. 写作法：两个长难/信息丰富句后跟短句  Meanwhile, this mode of division also benefits students.  写作法：总述的句子比较短，信息较少，“为什么”/“怎么样”的句子较长信息较多  When students at the same level learn together, they learn at the synchronized pace. Moving at the same pace,  写作法：通过“重复”（但是在表述上替换）来建立语句间的联系 the whole class learn with efficiency and effectiveness. They are not stalled by the slow learners or need to catch up with the high-achievers.

【Body部分的另一个Paragraph略】

【Conclusion略】

 

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12月1日真题（语句间的“长长短短”—— 长短搭配）：

Some people argue that the spending of money on the development of technology of space exploration is not justifiable. They believe that the money should be spent on other things. 这一句也是讨论的核心，不要不讨论；同时，题目暗示了比较关系：space exploration vs. other thingsTo what extent do you agree or disagree? 

【Introduction】

Developing space technologies, such as satellites, space shuttles, and space stations, is worth the money. 前一句话把信息交待清楚完善，后一句话就依托前一句话所建立起来的语境写个短句【写作法：语句间的配合】  No matter what the sum 写作法：通过“重复”（但是在表述上替换）来建立语句间的联系 is, it should not be spent elsewhere.

【Body部分的个Paragraph，讨论作者立场的反面】

* Admittedly, a government budget is divided, and every sector deserves their fair shares. 中句

* In other words, those other undertakings definitely matter, and the investment is necessary. 中句

* However, it would be unfair if they took more than the fair amounts. 短句

* Compared with other tasks, which serve to improve people’s life quality, keeping a nation affluent, healthy, and civilized, space exploration matters to the survival of the entire humanity, an issue more critical than life quality. 长句

* Humans probe the surroundings of our mother planet and travel further to study stars that interact with the Earth to see whether we are in a safe environment. 长句

【Body部分的另一个Paragraph，讨论作者的立场】

* Meanwhile, space projects are to search outer space for other planets and useful matters. 中句

* This makes perfect sense. 短句

* Humans, one day, in the distant or foreseeable future, will have to migrate to another planet, and the search for another habitable planet is necessary. 长句

* Some matters may be found exclusively in space and essential for many studies conducted on the Earth. 长句

* If the funding were pulled and humans were therefore caged in our little world, how would humans be able to make even a marginal breakthrough in the many other fields where research has been stagnant despite the billions of dollars of input? 长句

* The breakthrough will happen in no way. 短句

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2018年12月15日真题（一个整篇）：

Some countries have no legal requirements on the styles of people’s housing or office buildings. Therefore, people can build houses or buildings the way they like.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 利弊都要提及，区分孰多孰少

【Introduction】

When there is no law regulating the architecture of either residential or commercial buildings, there would be more drawbacks than the benefits. Unfortunately, thedetriments are obvious, and the only merit is tangential.

【Body部分的个Paragraph，让步 —— 以退为进】

Admittedly, when the styles of housing or buildings are not restricted, the diverse aesthetic needs of the residents or tenants can be met. Meanwhile, the unrestrained choice of styles can make certain practical needs met. Living in such houses or working in such buildings, people are delighted. // It is delightful/pleasant to live in such houses or to work in such buildings.

【Body部分的另一个Paragraph，讨论作者的立场】

Of the many problems, that such a structure may be a safety hazard is most alarming. The designs are likely to suffer defects in their functionality, and these flaws may be life-threatening. The desired styles may be pursued at the expense of certain details that ensure safety. Even though the errors may not be deliberate, they may occur without the law serving a reminder or warning. Less serious but important, another problem is that the neighbors may be annoyed. When a building is erected with no legal guidelines instructing the constructors, it may disturb the neighboring buildings. 【针对disturb 展开：“how”】 For example, if the building is too tall, it blocks the sunlight; if it stands too close to the next building, it causes intrusion; and some of its particular features may affect the traffic.

【Conclusion】

In conclusion, in those countries where no law regulates the styles of residential housing and office buildings, the lack of legal requirements is more likely to be disadvantageous than to be advantageous. The only benefit is hardly a redeeming point. 

 

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12月13日真题（“非-Argumentative”类型）：

Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history of their countries.Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in those famous people in the history of their countries?
【Introduction】

Among many of today’s young people, celebrities from foreign countries are better-known than historic figures in their own countries. For example, Tom Cruz may be a bigger name to Chinese teenagers than Zhan, Tianyou, a well-accomplished engineer in the history. A number of factors are behind this upsetting phenomenon, and fortunately, the problem does not have to persist.  喜欢套话么？就背这句。

【Body部分的个Paragraph，讨论原因】

First, exposure of different degrees makes the difference in people’s awareness. Celebrities’ stardom is created by publicity, such as endorsement of everyday commodities, frequent appearances in movies and shows, and even deliberate leaks of private affairs. The marketing may be so overwhelming that young people cannot miss those entertainers. By marked contrast, historic figures do not have such privileges. 写作法：洋红色标出的部分是通过“重复”（但是在表述上替换）来建立语句间的联系 As a matter of fact, they would be more famous if there were more posters, films and TV shows about them. In addition to the external factor,  写作法：写作法：the external factor指代上一个原因，从而让两个原因在行文结构上有联系；语法：倒装 behind this distinction lies the internal factor that young people prefer amusement to the heavy subject. Pop and movie stars are entertaining and cheering. In comparison, historical people and their experiences may provoke stressful thoughts.

【Body部分的另一个Paragraph，讨论对策，略】

【Conclusion】

In conclusion, in many countries, young people show a greater interest in international celebrities than in the historic figures in their own countries. Although this is unpleasant, it can be changed.  喜欢套话么？就背这句。

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