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雅思写作还在低分徘徊,你真的了解主体段怎么写?

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  雅思写作中最让烤鸭们头疼的,非雅思大作文主体段莫属了。同时,这也是众多烤鸭们得分最不理想的一个部分。事实证明,烤鸭们在实际写作中一般会遇到这三种问题:一、时间不充足;二、字数不够;三、思路不够清晰。

  而其原因,在于考生们不了解雅思写作的特点:不清楚如何安排文章结构,如何提出论点,如何论证以及如何展开段落。因而导致写出来的整篇文章就像一盘散沙,存在论点不明确、论证论据缺乏力度、结构逻辑混论等问题。

  今天,新航道常州雅思培训班小编为大家带来四点大作文主体段的写作方法,来帮助烤鸭们在雅思写作时,能做到更快更清晰地展开主体段的论述,避免以上问题的发生。

雅思写作还在低分徘徊,你真的了解主体段怎么写?

  //明确写作结构//

  在开始学习技巧之前,我们需要先明确主体段的写作结构,即基本结构是Topic sentence + Supporting sentences.

  通俗而言,Topic sentence就是用一句话来点明你的中心观点。Supporting sentences就是用2-3句话来论证你的中心句。

  而新航道常州雅思培训班小编会通过带大家写分支观点后的支持句,针对性的帮助大家更好的完成主体段内容。主要有以下四点:

  1

  Explanation

  延伸解释法:通过对分支观点进行解释和说明,进一步细化它的含义。常用解释句表达:Specifically,To be more precise / specific,…

  2

  并列与递进并列词

  常用表达:first/ first of all/in the first place/to begin with/second/also/… as well/…, too/another reason is that…

  3

  Extension

  因果关系法:这里分为两步。1、分支观点中的情况出现——带来的影响。2、原因是什么——从情况出现追溯到现象产生的原因/现象会导致什么后果。

  通俗地说就是不断的问自己为什么,从而形成一个严谨的逻辑闭环。举例说明:

  主题句:There are more job opportunities readily available in the big cities than in small towns.

  支持句:The economic conditions in big cities are generally better than those in small towns, which, in return, attracts more investment from commercial corporations. Therefore, compared with most of small towns, there are always more modern and international enterprises which can offer residents numerous job opportunities.

  4

  Data

  数据法:用数据说话,可以根据题目适当编撰,但不要太离谱并且要写明数据出处。常用表达:According to a recently conducted research / investigation /survey by authorities / …department, …

  //真题实战示范//

  真题题目:Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

  参考例子On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. To be more specific, this type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions.

  On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.

  你们看出来这篇例子都用了哪些方法呢?除了数据法以外,其他方法都是有用到哦~

  本例所用到的方法:

  因果关系法:The average visitor may become…, so…(第1段第3句)

  延伸解释法:To be more specific, this museum…(第1段最后一句)

  因果关系法:Some museums…, so that...(第2段第4句)

  延伸解释法:In this way, museums…(第2段最后一句)

  今天的写作技巧就分享到这里,你学废了吗?


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